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Band 5.5

Your neighbour has written to you to complain about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: explain the reason for the noise offer your neighbour an apology tell them what action you will take. Ask electrician to be as quiet as possible. Pay for additional electrician so job finished sooner.

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Dear Pooja I am motto bhullar. I
am
Wrong verb form
have been
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 living in
this
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 flat which
is
Wrong verb form
has been
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 next to your door
from
Change preposition
for
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last
Correct article usage
the last
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 10 years and we were planning to
refurbishment
Replace the word
refurbish it
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 but now we have
a
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apply
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time to start construction. That's why so
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
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noise
Use synonyms
are
Change the verb form
is
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 coming from my flat.
In addition
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, I would like to you if you will tell me your sleeping time
then
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i
Change the capitalization
I
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 will tell to workers
do
Unnecessary verb
apply
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not use any machinery which will create too much
noise
Use synonyms
as well as
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 I understand your situation
how
Correct word choice
and how
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 you will survive in
this
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noise
Use synonyms
 because you have
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
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small kids at home .
Moreover
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, I
feel apology
Wrong verb form
apologise
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 and I would like to
consider
Verb problem
ask
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 you if you
knows
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know
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 any electrician
which
Correct pronoun usage
who
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 will help us in
this
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 construction work without any
noise
Use synonyms
. Please send me a text on my email [email protected]. I am looking
forword
Correct your spelling
forward
 to hearing from you! Yours Sincerely Motto
bhullar
Change the capitalization
Bhullar
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Coherence and Cohesion
Improve organization by separating different ideas into paragraphs. For example, start a new paragraph when changing topics from explaining the noise to apologizing and offering solutions.
Task Achievement
Avoid informal language such as 'so many noise.' Use 'a lot of noise' or 'considerable noise' instead to maintain a formal tone.
Task Achievement
The letter conveys a clear and polite apology, demonstrating an understanding of the neighbor's situation.
Coherence and Cohesion
A proper greeting and closing were used in the letter, contributing to a well-structured response.
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