Your neighbour has written to you to complain about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: explain the reason for the noise offer your neighbour an apology tell them what action you will take. Ask electrician to be as quiet as possible. Pay for additional electrician so job finished sooner.
Dear Pooja
I am motto bhullar. I
am
living in Wrong verb form
have been
this
flat which is
next to your door Wrong verb form
has been
from
Change preposition
for
last
10 years and we were planning to Correct article usage
the last
refurbishment
but now we have Replace the word
refurbish it
a
time to start construction. That's why so Change the article
apply
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
noise
are
coming from my flat.
Change the verb form
is
In addition
, I would like to you if you will tell me your sleeping time then
i
will tell to workers Change the capitalization
I
do
not use any machinery which will create too much Unnecessary verb
apply
noise
as well as
I understand your situation how
you will survive in Correct word choice
and how
this
noise
because you have a
small kids at home . Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Moreover
, I feel apology
and I would like to Wrong verb form
apologise
consider
you if you Verb problem
ask
knows
any electrician Change the verb form
know
which
will help us in Correct pronoun usage
who
this
construction work without any noise
. Please send me a text on my email [email protected].
I am looking forword
to hearing from you!
Yours Sincerely
Motto Correct your spelling
forward
bhullar
Change the capitalization
Bhullar
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Coherence and Cohesion
Improve organization by separating different ideas into paragraphs. For example, start a new paragraph when changing topics from explaining the noise to apologizing and offering solutions.
Task Achievement
Avoid informal language such as 'so many noise.' Use 'a lot of noise' or 'considerable noise' instead to maintain a formal tone.
Task Achievement
The letter conveys a clear and polite apology, demonstrating an understanding of the neighbor's situation.
Coherence and Cohesion
A proper greeting and closing were used in the letter, contributing to a well-structured response.