The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart illustrates how many tourists visited three separate regions in a specific European nation, between the
years
1987 and 2007.
Overall
, the number of foreign visitors increased in all three places. The coast was visited by more tourists than the other two places during the given time,
whereas
the least amount of people went to the mountains. In 1987, 40,000 foreigners visited the coastline.
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figures decreased slightly in the next 5
years
to almost 35,000, by 1992,
then
inclined steadily throughout the remaining period to more than 70,000, by 2007. In the middle, with 20,000 overseas visitors, was the mountains. The number of foreigners who visited it annually rose slowly in the next 20
years
to almost 35,000, by 2007. On the lowest end of
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the lakes, which were seen by only 10,000 tourists in 1987. Its visitors increased sharply over the next 15
years
, surpassing that of both the coast and the mountains, to almost 75,000 in 2002, before declining to 50,000 by the end of the mentioned time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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