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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The given line chart illustrates the
consumption
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 of
fish
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 and some different types of meat namely chicken,
lamb
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, and
beef
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 in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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, the
consumption
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 of
beef
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 decreased,
while
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 the
consumption
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 of chicken increased throughout the period.
Lamb
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consumption
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 experienced a decrease, and
fish
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consumption
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 remained almost stable. In 1979, the
consumption
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 of
beef
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 stood at around 220
grams
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 per
week
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, and after a slight decrease, it increased to roughly 230
grams
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 per
week
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 in the year 1983.
Then
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,
beef
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consumption
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 experienced several fluctuations throughout the period, and in 2004, the
consumption
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 of
beef
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 reached around 110
grams
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 per
week
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.
In contrast
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, the
consumption
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 of chicken was around 145
grams
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 in a
week
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, which experienced a gradual increase and reached around 240
grams
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 per
week
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 in the year 2004. The
consumption
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 of
lamb
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 stood at 150
grams
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 per
week
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, and it experienced a gradual decrease. In 2004,
lamb
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consumption
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 decreased to approximately 60
grams
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 per
week
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. Meanwhile,
fish
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consumption
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 stood at around 60
grams
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 per
week
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 and remained almost stable. In 2004, the
consumption
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 of
fish
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 reached around 50
grams
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 per
week
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, lamb, beef, grams, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • trend
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • plummet
  • soar
  • steady
  • exponential
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • food industry
  • innovation
  • cultural shift
  • economic conditions
  • demographic changes
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