The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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The flowchart provides key information about the
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bricks
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brick
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manufacturing stages for the building industry.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the
bricks
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industry is
a
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multi-stage and complex, it
started
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with digging the
clay
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and
ending
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ends
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with packaging the
bricks
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.
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, the initial stages began with
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a grid
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grid
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grinding
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the
clay
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into
roller
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the roller
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and forming the
bricks
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,
whereas
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, the latter steps
involve
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involved
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allocating
that
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the
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bricks
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on
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to
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a drying oven and
package
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packaging
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it
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them
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after
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afterwards
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.
According to
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what is shown, the first group steps involved using a digger to dig the
clay
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; after that, the
clay
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will be rolled after grid it in a metal grid, shaping
the blocks size
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the size of the block
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will be done by two methods, either with a wire cutter or with a
mold’s
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mould’s
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frame to shape it into the standard size, but before that, the sand and water will be added to facilitate the process. In terms of the latter stages,
began
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with allocating the formed
bricks
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into a drying oven for at least
on
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one
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day, the oven stage includes some steps which
starts
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with
a
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moderate heat
with
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of
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almost 980 degrees after that, the heat will soar to about 1300 degrees, before packaging the
bricks
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it must allocate in a cooling chamber for over two days.
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, the
bricks
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will be ready to be delivered.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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