You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.
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The given line chart compares data about the figures of people per million who visited 4 various museums around the world namely, Louvre,London Science, Vatican, and Shenzhen from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, it was important that the trends of all places other than London Science and Shenzhen increased over the period of 35 years.
According to
the diagram, at the start, the Louvre, the main museum that had a lot of visitors all the time, hit just under 8 in 1980;
then
it climbed moderately to 9 in 1995;
however
, it reduced to nearly 8.5 in 2000, but it jumped slightly and reached roughly 9.5 in 2015. Vatican museums scored almost 5 in 1980;
thereafter
, it leapt significantly to approximately 9 in 2015. The graph demonstrates that these lines were
in contrast
to the
last
fashions owing to the fact that in the beginning, London Science recorded just over 4 in 1980 after that, it stabilized until 1985;
then
it declined marginally to just over 2 in 2015. Shenzhen Museum reported just under 4 in 1980;
then
it dropped and hit nearly the same number as the prior building between 1990 to 2000 ,and in 2000, it touched the nadir at 3;
although
, it grew to about 4 in 2015.
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