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You work for a company and have recently decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter explain why you are writing explain why you have decided to leave the company When you are going to leave

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your kind notice that I am resigning from
the
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 current job in your prestigious company. I
had
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filed an application for a post-graduate degree at the University of London in the month of August 2024.
For which
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 I received an admission letter from the
univeristy
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university
 authorities on 30th of September 2024, stating that I have been granted admission for the course. The degree curriculum is for 2 years and demands
full time
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 dedication. Owing to
this
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 reason, I will be unable to continue being employed at your company. Since by joining date for the course is
1st
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 of December 2024, I will be employed
her
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here
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 till
thhe
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the
 30th
November
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 2024. Thereby, I assure you
completeion
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completion
 of all pending tasks by
this
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 date to ensure
smooth
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 transition and training of the new employee appointed in my place. Yours sincerely, Tim Clarks
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task achievement
Ensure consistency in tense usage, especially when referencing future and past events.
coherence cohesion
Double-check spelling and typographical errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
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Clear explanation of reasons for resignation due to educational opportunity.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure maintained with a clear beginning, body, and conclusion.
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Appropriate tone used throughout the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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