Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for presentation at work. Describe the presentation Why was it important? How did it help you?

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Dear Sukhjit I hope you are well. You will
glad
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to know that my
presentation
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goes
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very well and everyone
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me for
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presentation
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the presentation
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but all
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just because of you my brother and I thank you so much for the book which you gave me for preparation. You know, I
am
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so nervous during my
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presentation
presenation
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presentation
but I
apply
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all the things which
i
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I
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read in the book( How
we can give
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best
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Presentation
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)
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, My boss was
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happy
from
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me because I
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able to share my
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to
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all stakeholders and they
also
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interest in our company. I hope soon I will get a Promotion but your book
play
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an important role in
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achievement because it helps me to learn how we can make
presentation
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more attractive by using our tone, body posture and so on. I am really
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grateful
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grateful
to you, In future if you need any help please let me know
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faithfully
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single idea per paragraph
Try to maintain a single idea per paragraph to improve clarity.
logical structure
Ensure logical flow between points to enhance overall coherence.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and polite.
complete response
The letter responds completely to the task, addressing all required points.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is appropriately friendly and grateful, suitable for writing to a colleague.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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