The table shows The table shows the proportions of pupils attending foue secondary school types between 2000 and 2009
The given table shows the ratio of pupils who attended four types of secondary
schools
namely, Specialist schools
, Grammar schools
, Voluntary-controlled schools
, and Community
schools
during 2000 and 2009. Overall
, the proportion of attendees in Voluntary-controlled schools
fall
drastically, Wrong verb form
fell
while
, in community
schools
the percentage of students increased by 46%. In specialist Add a comma
schools,
schools
the proportion of students remained almost Add a comma
schools,
same
each year because it had just decreased by 1% every five years. Correct article usage
the same
However
, in the Grammer schools
, the initial percent
of attendees Replace the word
percentage
were
24% Correct subject-verb agreement
was
at
2000 but by 2009 it reduced by half. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, in community
school
in Fix the agreement mistake
schools
year
2000, there were only 12% Change the article
the year
students
but it increased significantly Change preposition
of students
in
every 5 Change preposition
apply
year
, Change to a plural noun
years
by
2009 more than half of the people attended Correct word choice
and by
community
schools
which is 58%. Whereas
in Voluntary-controlled schools
the ratio of admissions shrink
, in 2000 the ratio was 52%, which was much more than Wrong verb form
shrank
of
other Correct pronoun usage
that of
schools
, but by 2009 it got lessend
by 32%.Correct your spelling
lessened
lessen
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