Many people are choosing to live on their own. Is this a positive or a negative trend?What is your opinion and share your personal experiences? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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word artificial intelligence is in trend commonly known as AI. It prefers to a
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various questions and can do various tasks using its algorithm set by humans. Many people think that development in
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with, artificial intelligence was first introduced by Sir John Edward in 1990. It was first used in a calculator to calculate complex calculations. from that time period, It has developed a lot.
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, one can make a short animation movie using AI on just a mobile by providing specific information. It
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reduced a lot of work and pressure on people especially in
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field as much of the work is done using AI.
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of technology and advancement in
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a million or even
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scam can be done if a bank is using
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for the transition of money by using just a computer.
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, It can even prove to be a danger
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humanity. In conclusion,
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me development in AI would
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a positive impact on our
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and can help in the development of large upcoming
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as it
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the
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most of the work.
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coherence cohesion
Improve cohesion by ensuring smoother transitions between paragraphs. For instance, the shift from supporting AI's benefits to discussing its drawbacks could be more seamless.
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Provide more detailed examples or anecdotes to support your points and make your arguments more convincing.
task achievement
Ensure that all parts of the task are answered thoroughly, including a deeper reflection on personal experiences related to AI.
introduction conclusion present
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to frame the topic effectively.
complete response
You have made a good attempt to introduce and discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of AI, showing a balanced perspective.
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You have used historical context effectively by mentioning the introduction of AI by Sir John Edward.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-reliance
  • personal growth
  • privacy
  • personal space
  • financial burden
  • cost-sharing
  • loneliness
  • isolation
  • flexibility
  • freedom
  • safety risks
  • elderly individuals
  • health issues
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