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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented picture demonstrates the production of a biofuel called ethanol.
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, it can be noted that the process is cyclical and can be separated into 2 main stages: harvesting and
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 processing. First of all, it is important to mention, that ethanol is used in various types of
transports
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transport
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: from regular cars and lorries to
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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.
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, when being used, they emit carbon dioxide, which is later accumulated
on
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 growing plants and trees with the assistance of sunlight.
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the trees and plants must be harvested and transported to the pre-processing facility, where they will be thoroughly
grinded
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 and transformed into cellulose, the key component of
the
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apply
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biofuel production. After that, the main stage of processing begins.
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, the cellulose is broken down into sugar molecules, and
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, with added microbes, it
turnes
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turns
turned
 into ethanol, which will
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 be used again as a biofuel for the aforementioned means of
transportations
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introduction conclusion present
Ensure that the introduction provides a clearer overview of the diagram’s elements and their relevance.
clear comprehensive ideas
Make sure to define technical terms or concepts such as 'cellulose' for a broader audience.
logical structure
Include a clearer distinction between stages to highlight the cyclical nature effectively.
logical structure
The description successfully captures the cyclical nature of the ethanol production process.
relevant specific examples
Uses of ethanol are concisely linked to real-world applications, enhancing the relevance.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
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  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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