The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked

cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the number of
men
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and
women
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who used cigarettes between 2011 to 2012 in the UK. The units are measured in millions of people.
Overall
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, the majority of smokers are
Men
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in all years
while
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women
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come in second place for cigarettes. Both
men
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and
women
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have the same stable in all years ago. As can be seen from the graph, in 2011 females and males were close to each other with a simple rate, the
men
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at about 4
million
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and
women
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at 3.5
million
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. In 2013 the number of males who conception smoked was 2,5
million
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. And females have declined to 900.
also
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, I realized in 2018
women
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had gone up in numbers after stability for a long time around 1,7
million
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.
However
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, in 2013 and 2017 the smoking
men
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had the same rate at nearly 2.5
million
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. But in the end, the number of people who smoked in the UK decreased dramatically for both
women
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and
men
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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