The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph demonstrates the
number
of foreigners who visited the United Kingdom for various reasons from 1989 to 2009.
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Overall
, most overseas Linking Words
visitors
came to the UK for holidays throughout the two decades, Use synonyms
although
there were some fluctuations. The Linking Words
number
of people visiting friends and relatives rose steadily, Use synonyms
while
business-related visits experienced a moderate increase.
In 1989, over Linking Words
six
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million
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visitors
travelled to the UK for holidays The Use synonyms
number
increased gradually over the next five-year period and Use synonyms
then
rose significantly, peaking at just under ten Linking Words
million
in 1999. Use synonyms
However
, the figure declined substantially in the following decade dipping below eight Linking Words
million
in 2004 before recovering to slightly below ten Use synonyms
million
by 2009.
Less than four Use synonyms
million
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visitors
came to visit friends and relatives in 1989. Use synonyms
This
figure increased steadily to exceed Linking Words
six
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million
in 2004 but dropped gradually to approximately Use synonyms
six
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million
by 2009. Use synonyms
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Similarly
business travel began with just under Add a comma
Similarly,
six
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million
foreigners in 1989 but experienced a dip to approximately four Use synonyms
million
before 1994. The Use synonyms
number
of business Use synonyms
visitors
grew considerably to reach a peak of eight Use synonyms
million
between 2004 and 2009 before falling slightly to just over Use synonyms
six
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million
in 2009.Use synonyms
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