The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph demonstrates the
number
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of foreigners who visited the United Kingdom for various reasons from 1989 to 2009.
Overall
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, most overseas
visitors
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came to the UK for holidays throughout the two decades,
although
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there were some fluctuations. The
number
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of people visiting friends and relatives rose steadily,
while
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business-related visits experienced a moderate increase. In 1989, over
six
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million
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visitors
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travelled to the UK for holidays The
number
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increased gradually over the next five-year period and
then
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rose significantly, peaking at just under ten
million
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in 1999.
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, the figure declined substantially in the following decade dipping below eight
million
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in 2004 before recovering to slightly below ten
million
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by 2009. Less than four
million
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visitors
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came to visit friends and relatives in 1989.
This
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figure increased steadily to exceed
six
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million
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in 2004 but dropped gradually to approximately
six
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million
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by 2009.
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Similarly
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business travel began with just under
six
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million
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foreigners in 1989 but experienced a dip to approximately four
million
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before 1994. The
number
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of business
visitors
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grew considerably to reach a peak of eight
million
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between 2004 and 2009 before falling slightly to just over
six
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million
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in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, six, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • trend
  • fluctuations
  • statistics
  • year-on-year comparison
  • peak periods
  • holidaymakers
  • business trips
  • educational tourism
  • significant increase/decrease
  • data interpretation
  • exponential growth
  • steady decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cultural events
  • tourist influx
  • graph analysis
  • quantitative change
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