The diagram details the process of making wool. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram depicts the process of manufacturing the

wool

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into varied end products. From an

overall

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perspective

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it is readily apparent, that there are several specific stages which start from transforming raw

wool

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from sheep and interim steps of various processes like cleaning, colouring and getting strings in the end.

Initially

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, the

wool

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should be sheared from sheep

following

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followed

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with

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by

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cleaning and drying. The prepared clean raw material

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goes to

spinning

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the spinning

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stage on special machines. The

producing

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production

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of

wool

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after spinning on tools divides. One step is the separation

the

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of the

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wool

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on many rolls, making tufts of

wool

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and keeping

in

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it in

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warehouses under peculiar conditions. After the

wool

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is fashioned into balls of yarn and are ready for trading. Balls of thread are used in various end products like carpet weaving and knitwear or can be

selling

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sold

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for knitting. The next subdivided step after spinning is

the

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apply

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getting strings and recycling.