The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by seleccting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the
sugarcanes
are used to produce sugar
.
Overall
, this
manufacturing process
involves 7 - steps beginning with cropping the sugarcanes
followed by
crushing them to make Verb problem
and then
syrup
. Finally
, the syrup
turned out as sugar
crystals.
Firstly
, the crops of sugarcanes
are cultivated for around 12- 18 months through which sugarcanes
become tall enough for the harvesting process
. In this
process
, farmers usually cut the long sugarcanes
manually from their lower section leaving the roots as such
or it can be done by harvesting machines which cut canes in large quantities. In the third step, a machine is used to crush sugarcanes
into juice which is further
collected into a huge tub.
Subsequently
, a purification process
is required to filter out juice which is done by a limestone filter. In the next step, filtered juice is poured into a massive container. A burner is used to heat this
container so that a syrup
is formed in the evaporator. Furthermore
, sugar
crystals are separated from syrup
by centrifugation . In the final step, crystals are collected into a big tub to follow the procedure of drying and cooling of sugar
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