The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by seleccting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the
sugarcanes
are used to produce Use synonyms
sugar
.
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Overall
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this
manufacturing Linking Words
process
involves 7 - steps beginning with cropping the Use synonyms
sugarcanes
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followed by
crushing them to make Verb problem
and then
syrup
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
syrup
turned out as Use synonyms
sugar
crystals.
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Firstly
, the crops of Linking Words
sugarcanes
are cultivated for around 12- 18 months through which Use synonyms
sugarcanes
become tall enough for the harvesting Use synonyms
process
. In Use synonyms
this
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process
, farmers usually cut the long Use synonyms
sugarcanes
manually from their lower section leaving the roots as Use synonyms
such
or it can be done by harvesting machines which cut canes in large quantities. In the third step, a machine is used to crush Linking Words
sugarcanes
into juice which is Use synonyms
further
collected into a huge tub.
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Subsequently
, a purification Linking Words
process
is required to filter out juice which is done by a limestone filter. In the next step, filtered juice is poured into a massive container. A burner is used to heat Use synonyms
this
container so that a Linking Words
syrup
is formed in the evaporator. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
sugar
crystals are separated from Use synonyms
syrup
by centrifugation . In the final step, crystals are collected into a big tub to follow the procedure of drying and cooling of Use synonyms
sugar
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugarcanes, sugar, process, syrup with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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