The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavant.
The line graph illustrates the count of closed and newly opened
shops
in a specific nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number of closures declined slightly throughout the period with a massive plummet in 2015. The number of new openings decreased significantly, although
there were some fluctuations in the figures over the seven-year period.
The total of closed shops
began at more than 6000, then
varied until 2014, reaching around 6500. In 2015, the figures experienced their lowest point at around 500 shops
. After a dramatic rise to just above 5000 retail stores in 2016, the number stayed constant over the next two years.
In 2011, there were around 8500 new openings, which fell to approximately 4000 stores in 2012. After a steady increase in the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
shops
to just over 6000 in 2014, it dropped to 4000 in 2015 and remained steady for the next two years before decreasing to 3000 outlets in 2018.Submitted by prabodyagamage on
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