The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given maps demonstrate alternatives that happen for the campus of one institute from 2010 to today.
Overall
, it is important that the number of residential places and facilities increase
while
the vegetation is destroyed.
According to
the diagram, the main
road
has been stabilising, but now, in the centre of the picture we can see the new
road
;
additionally
, the figure for students' dormitories climbed owing to the fact that in the past, just near the main
road
we can see the accommodation places near the
road
and at the left of the
lake
;
however
, in the present, next to the
last
hall of resident and
instead
of the shop and the restaurant, near the
lake
, we can see the student's accommodation.
In addition
, the
last
dormitory, which was near the
lake
, is altered by the large building that has a facilities-shop, offices, and so on for the people who study at
this
university. The graphs illustrate that in 2010, next to the buildings for students were the University offices; nowadays,
this
district is replaced by the science building. The previous teaching blocks were changed by the Art building;
moreover
, the lawn and seating area, around the
lake
, were destroyed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, lake with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • campus
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • sustainable
  • accessibility
  • layout
  • pedestrian zones
  • transportation routes
  • parking facilities
  • greenery
  • sports center
  • lecture halls
  • demolition
  • modernize
  • expansion
  • enhancement
  • comprehensive development
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