The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The pie charts provided above depict

mean

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proportions of three ingredients of our daily meals, if overeaten, can cause health problems. It can be seen that

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the amount of

sodium

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and saturated fat in

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dinner and in the

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lunch

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remarkably more than other meals,

snaks

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snacks

contains

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much more

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added

sugar

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. Regarding the percentages of

sodium

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and saturated fat, by eating

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dinner and a

luch

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lunch

, an individual can take up

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nearly

over

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of the required amounts, and

snaks

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snacks

snakes

and breakfast account for 28% and 38% of

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and saturated fat respectively. In fact, they have approximately one and

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times more fat than salt. Turning to the

sugar

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data,

snaks

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snacks

snakes

satisfies

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42% of our daily

sugar

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need

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, the richest meal in terms of containing

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it can be found in dinners as half the amount of

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, which is 23%.

Breackfast

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Breakfast

with 16 per cent

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luch

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lunch

with 19 per

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cent

provide

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requirements.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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