The line chart below illustrates the amount of worldwide tourist arrivals in 5 countries from 1995 until 2010. Overall, all of the nations presented had seen the increase in that number.

The line chart below illustrates the amount of worldwide tourist arrivals in 5 countries from 1995 until 2010. Overall, all of the nations presented had seen the increase in that number.
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The line chart illustrates the
number
of international tourists arriving in the USA, France, Malaysia, Brazil, and Egypt from 1995 to 2010, measured in millions.
Overall
, it is evident that the
number
of worldwide tourist arrivals in all given countries increased in 2010. Notably, France had the highest growth over the period. The
number
of arrivals in the USA started at approximately 70
million
, and
this
steadily escalated to above 80
million
in 2010.
However
, France had the wildest fluctuations, with a massive jump from 30
million
in 1995 to 60
million
in 2000, and eventually, reaching over 80
million
at the end
of the period, meeting the USA with the same amount of arrivals. Meanwhile, Malaysia had 20
million
visitors in 1995,
then
it rose gradually to over 40
million
in 2010. Ultimately, both Brazil and Egypt began with approximately 10
million
tourists, the lowest
number
in any other country, and it increased to above 10
million
in 2010.
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