The charts below show the average precentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The three pie charts illustrate the proportion of three types of nutrients (
sodium
, saturated fat, and Use synonyms
sugar
) in four typical meals consumed in the Use synonyms
USA
(breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snacks)
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Overall
, Most of the citizens in the Linking Words
USA
consume Use synonyms
Sodium
and fat in the evening, Use synonyms
while
they add more Linking Words
sugar
to their snacks. Use synonyms
Therefore
, three of all the least consumption in the mornings. From the pie clear that the majority of people in the Linking Words
USA
have an unhealthy habit.
The proportion of Use synonyms
sodium
had the highest at dinner time Use synonyms
accounted
for 43%, followed the saturated fat Wrong verb form
accounting
around
37%, and Change preposition
at around
sugar
Use synonyms
around
23%. From the bar, it shows the majority of the Change preposition
at around
USA
citizens consumed Use synonyms
sugar
as a snack around 42%, Use synonyms
while
less of people consumed Linking Words
sodium
(14%) and fat (21%) as snacks.
In terms of breakfast, many people in the Use synonyms
USA
not having unhealthy breakfasts. All of them accounted Use synonyms
16
% of fat and Change preposition
for 16
sugar
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
sodium
was around 14%. There are, both Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat had little difference in consumed as lunch around 29% by Use synonyms
sodium
, 26% by saturated fat, and around 19% for consumed Use synonyms
sugar
.Use synonyms
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