The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.

The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.
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The first bar chart displays the average
house
prices
in
England
and
London
between 1995 and 2013.
Also
, the second bar chart shows the mean home
prices
in different regions of
England
in 2013.  
Overall
, the average
house
prices
in
England
and in
London
increased in the time frame. Afterwards, the highest average home price in 2013 was in
London
However
, the lowest one was in the North of
England
.   The trajectory of mean
house
prices
in
England
clearly showed an upward trend, reaching nearly 50,000 and 150,000 GBP in 1995 and 2013, respectively.
Similarly
, the mean
prices
of homes in
London
had the same trend in the same time span.   It is evident that
London
had the highest average
house
price in 2013, at approximately 400,000 GBP, a significant difference from other regions.
However
, the North of
England
had the lowest average
house
price in 2013, which was approximately 100,000 GBP.
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