The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information about the results of a survey of people's
coffee
and
tea
buying, and drinking habits in five different Australian cities.
Overall
,
according to
the chart, over 50% of individuals went to a cafe for caffeine or
tea
in the
last
four weeks, and more than 40% bought
instant
cappuccino. The habit of buying
instant
coffee
is higher than fresh
espresso
.
Firstly
, the percentage of buying
instant
coffee
is about 40% to nearly 60%,
however
, fresh
espresso
averages around 30% to 40%.
Secondly
, in the past four weeks, the number between buying fresh
coffee
and
instant
caffeine of public living in Sydney is almost the same, it is about 42% to 45%.
In addition
, more than 60% of Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart citizens went to a
coffee
bar to drink
espresso
or
tea
.
On the other hand
, In Brisbane, only 35% of the society bought fresh
espresso
, and most of them went to a bistro for an
instant
cappuccino. The same trend happened in Hobart, where 62% of communities bought beverages at a
coffee
shop and only 37% bought fresh
coffee
.
In contrast
, in Adelaide, most population consumed
instant
caffeine, at a rate of 50%.
Although
, only 38% went to a
coffee
shop for
coffee
or
tea
, and the same number with Brisbane, just about 35% bought fresh
espresso
.
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