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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information about the results of a survey of people's
coffee
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 and
tea
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 buying, and drinking habits in five different Australian cities.
Overall
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,
according to
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 the chart, over 50% of individuals went to a cafe for caffeine or
tea
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 in the
last
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 four weeks, and more than 40% bought
instant
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 cappuccino. The habit of buying
instant
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coffee
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 is higher than fresh
espresso
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.
Firstly
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, the percentage of buying
instant
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coffee
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 is about 40% to nearly 60%,
however
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, fresh
espresso
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 averages around 30% to 40%.
Secondly
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, in the past four weeks, the number between buying fresh
coffee
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 and
instant
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 caffeine of public living in Sydney is almost the same, it is about 42% to 45%.
In addition
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, more than 60% of Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart citizens went to a
coffee
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 bar to drink
espresso
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 or
tea
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.
On the other hand
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, In Brisbane, only 35% of the society bought fresh
espresso
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, and most of them went to a bistro for an
instant
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 cappuccino. The same trend happened in Hobart, where 62% of communities bought beverages at a
coffee
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 shop and only 37% bought fresh
coffee
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.
In contrast
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, in Adelaide, most population consumed
instant
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 caffeine, at a rate of 50%.
Although
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, only 38% went to a
coffee
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 shop for
coffee
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 or
tea
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, and the same number with Brisbane, just about 35% bought fresh
espresso
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, instant, espresso with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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