The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for the different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #numbers #participants #activities #centre #melbourne #australia #period #summarise #features #comparisons
The line graph provides information on the number of
participants
for the different activities at one social centre in Melbourne Australia in
2000 until 2020. In general, film club become the activity with the highest Change preposition
from
participants
, Correct quantifier usage
number of participants
whereas
other activities shows
Change the verb form
show
a
various numbers.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Film
club Correct article usage
The film
become
the highest Verb problem
has
participants
ever since 2000. It started with around 65 Correct quantifier usage
number of participants
people
and remained constant until 2020. Following in the
second place is martial arts with over 35 applicants in 2000 and Correct article usage
apply
plunctuated
throughout the years before it Correct your spelling
punctuated
fluctuated
reach
around the same numbers in 2020. On Wrong verb form
reached
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
tabble
tennis shows a Correct your spelling
table
signicant
increase Correct your spelling
significant
for
the Change preposition
in
participants
over the years. Starting with less than 20 Correct quantifier usage
number of participants
people
in 2000 the number then
slowly rise
to 20 and Wrong verb form
rose
stablilised
before it soared until reaching a Correct your spelling
stabilised
stabilise
peaks
of over 50 Correct the article-noun agreement
peak
people
in 2020.
Similarly
, the number of applicants for the musical perfomances
Correct your spelling
performances
increase
rapidly from 2005 until Wrong verb form
increased
reach
over 17 Wrong verb form
reaching
people
in 2020. In contrast
, participants
for the amateur dramatics shows
a decrease Wrong verb form
showed
with
over 25 Change preposition
to
people
in 2000 and remain
stable before it plummeted to less than 10 Wrong verb form
remained
people
in 2020.Submitted by salwaputrihardiyan on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words participants, people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼