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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts represent the total number of
hours
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students
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 in five diverse
universities
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 dedicate to studying during the day.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the majority of
students
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 focus more on studying during weekdays, and its figure exhibited nearly identical
study
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hours
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 across all five
universities
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. Meanwhile, downward
study
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 trends were observed in the total
hours
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 per day on
weekends
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, with D
university
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 showing the smallest figure. Looking in more detail, C
university
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students
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study
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studied
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 10.6
hours
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 each day during weekdays, which was five and six minutes longer than those from B and E
univerity
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university
, who studied for 10.1
hours
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 and 10
hours
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 respectively. The figure for the remaining two colleges,
on the other hand
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,
accounting
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accounts
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 slightly behind ten
hours
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 by 9.8 for A
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university
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University
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 and 9.6 for D
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university
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University
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. During
weekends
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,
although
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students
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 in all
universities
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 spent fewer
hours
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 studying than on workdays, those at A
university
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 reduced only for 8 minutes, compared to others where the reduction was over an hour.
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, D
university
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 dropped to 5.6
hours
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 and became the least number over all colleges on
weekends
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study
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. On the same
weekends
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, the three
universities
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 where
students
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 studied 10
hours
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 on weekdays saw a decline to under 8
hours
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. Specifically,
students
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 at B
University
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, C
University
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, and E
University
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 spent 8.6
hours
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, 7.6
hours
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, and 6.2
hours
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 studying, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, students, universities, study, weekends, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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