The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the US from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparions where relevant.
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The line chart provides information about
households
that had washing machines, computers, phones,
internet
, and DVD players between 1995-1999. Even though the percentage of all 5 devices increased, a significant increase can be observed for some of them
such
as phones and the
Internet
. In 1995 nearly 18% of
households
owned a phone,
however
in a short amount of time it reached over 70%. Phones become the second most popular item among these five devices in
households
.
Also
,
internet
usage changed over time from almost 10% to 50%.
This
means every one house out of 2 contained
internet
connection in 1999. Washing machines kept and even increased its importance for
households
in 5 years. The DVD player has fluctuation in its trend, but still, it reached nearly 40% in 1999. In 1995 computers could be found in almost 40% of every household in the US. As time passed,
similarly
to other devices, it had an upward trend and reached its peak in 1999 with nearly 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adoption rates
  • technological proliferation
  • year-on-year growth
  • digital divide
  • saturation point
  • laggard technology
  • consumer electronics
  • technological obsolescence
  • internet penetration
  • market dynamics
  • socioeconomic factors
  • innovation trajectory
  • connectivity infrastructure
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