The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of
journeys
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made by
students
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aged 11 to 6 to courses across a year.
This
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survey was conducted in the UK, comparing several distances to
school
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with the four diverse modes of transportation.
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, it can be seen that walking to the
school
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showed a downward trend as the distance to
school
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increased. Meanwhile, the greater the distance, the more
students
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preferred using the bus as their transportation. Starting at 90% of the total
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students
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student
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population in the UK, the figure for walking to
school
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fell marginally, reaching a quarter of total
journeys
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when the distance
between
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is between
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2 and 5
miles
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.
On the other hand
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, cycling fluctuated over the period of a year. Increasing from a half to 75%, the rate of
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bicycle
users fell again to 50% when the
journeys
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around were between 2 and 5
miles
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. In the same year, bus usage for
students
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soared, beginning at 1-2
miles
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, rising from 10% to more than threefold at 2-5
miles
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, and accounting for 70% of
journeys
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over 5
miles
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.
Although
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car usage for children to travel to courses showed a similar trend to buses, the rise was more modest, with no more than 30% for
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school
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schools
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located between 2 and over 5
miles
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away.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words journeys, students, school, miles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Modes of transportation
  • Percentage
  • Comparative analysis
  • Seasonal variations
  • External factors
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Non-motorized modes
  • Safety
  • Convenience
  • Sustainable
  • Initiatives
  • Promoting
  • Improvements
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