The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The table shows a diagram of how
milk
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is made from the first to the
last
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steps. It all begins when cows are ready to give
milk
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, which they produce
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themselves by eating enough grass and staying healthy,
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the
milk
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cannot have any diseases or parasites. The farmer or a person in charge of milking the cow, later, when done with that, puts the product in the fridge in order not to spoil it,
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waiting to be dispatched with authorized trucks, fit for
milk
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transportation. Later the containers are brought to the dairy, where the
milk
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is either pasteurized or made into the following products: cheese, cream or butter. They are all packaged with fitted labels, which show what kind of products they are. The production of cheese is different from that of cream or butter, and vice versa. The results are later distributed through the supermarkets, ready for consumption
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the customers.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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