The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates the way in which
milk
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is produced and later on put up for selling.
Overall
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, there are eight stages in the process, starting with cows grazing and ending with products in supermarkets and shops.
To begin
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, the cows are put into cages and milked by a milking machine twice a day.
This
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milk
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is later gathered and kept in refrigeration
storages
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storage
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to keep it cool.
Then
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a
milk
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tanker makes a daily delivery to the Dairy with the liquid stored in the tank of the car.
Following
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this
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, when it has reached the Dairy,
milk
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could either be pasteurized and packaged to be put up
in
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store
shelfs
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shelves
shelf
for selling, or it could be used for other products
such
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as cheese, cream and butter production.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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