You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir/Madam,
Couple
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A couple
days
ago I was reading Change preposition
of days
Travel
magazine that Correct article usage
a Travel
which
contained Correct pronoun usage
apply
information
about my town
that in
inappropriately inaccurate.
The article mentioned that Correct your spelling
is
population
in my Correct article usage
the population
town
is 5000 people while
the correct number is 11,000 thousand. Moreover
there Add a comma
Moreover,
have
been very misleading Change the verb form
has
information
about agricultural
business. It is saying that our Add an article
the agricultural
an agricultural
town
is famous for coffee bean farm
which completely don't align with reality especially considering the fact and our location we have never had and will never be able to have coffee bean farms. We do make and are famous for ice wine since we have Fix the agreement mistake
farms
cold
climate and suitable soil that helps to grow delicious grapes.
When providing accurate Add an article
a cold
number
won't make Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
huge
difference for Add an article
a huge
tourist
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tourists
information
about GDP can we lead people to places they were not planing
to visitCorrect your spelling
planning
.
Change the punctuation
?
Furthermore
it puts our Add a comma
Furthermore,
town
under the shadow for
what we are famousChange preposition
of
.
I highly suggest Change preposition
for.
to take
Change the verb form
taking
imidiate
Correct your spelling
immediate
actions
before it Fix the agreement mistake
action
cause
any trouble. People should be aware Change the verb form
causes
where
they are Change preposition
of where
traveling
, especially if they want to explore coffee bean farms. It would be extremely disappointing to Change the spelling
travelling
trevel
all the way for something that doesn't exist. My suggestion is to remove all the inaccurate Correct your spelling
travel
information
magazines from the market and to verify credibility
of Add an article
the credibility
resources
you are using.
Wish you good luck in Correct article usage
the resources
this
matter.
Faithfully yours,
Sofiia LyefiSubmitted by Alla
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