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the bar chart below shows the percantage of Australian maen and women in different age groups who did regular activity in 2010.

the bar chart below shows the percantage of Australian maen and women in different age groups who did regular activity in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of Australian females and males in various
age
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 groups who did physical
activity
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 on a regular basis in 2010.
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, women from the 25 to 34
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group
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 until 65 and over
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group
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 had the highest
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 percentage,
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 in
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the 15
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 to 24
age
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group
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 men recorded the most
activity
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 proportion. Women in
45
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the 45
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 to 54
age
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group
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 contributed to the most regular physical
activity
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. As for the proportion of physical
activity
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 among men, the 15 to 24
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group
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 was the leading category, with nearly 52.8 of people being active regularly, slightly outperforming the 65 or over
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group
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 at 46.7. Meanwhile, the 35 to 44
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group
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 showed the lowest amount of physical
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roughly 39.5, which is noticeably lower than other
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 groups. Males
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 the 45 to 54 and 55 to 64
age
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group
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 experienced an approximately similar amount at 43.1 and 45.1, respectively. In
women
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the women
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 category, the 45 to 54 led in physical
activity
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 shares with about 53.3, followed by
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the 55
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 to 64
age
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group
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 at 53. The 35 to 44
age
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group
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 ranked first. with a physical
activity
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 rate of around 52.5,
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 the 65 and over
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group
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 had the lowest proportion. standing at just 47.1.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, activity, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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