the bar chart below shows the percantage of Australian maen and women in different age groups who did regular activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the number of Australian females and males in various
age
groups who did physical activity
on a regular basis in 2010.
Overall
, women from the 25 to 34 age
group
until 65 and over age
group
had the highest activity
percentage, while
in 15
to 24 Correct article usage
the 15
age
group
men recorded the most activity
proportion. Women in 45
to 54 Correct article usage
the 45
age
group
contributed to the most regular physical activity
.
As for the proportion of physical activity
among men, the 15 to 24 age
group
was the leading category, with nearly 52.8 of people being active regularly, slightly outperforming the 65 or over age
group
at 46.7. Meanwhile, the 35 to 44 age
group
showed the lowest amount of physical activity
of
roughly 39.5, which is noticeably lower than other Change preposition
apply
age
groups. Males with
the 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 Change preposition
in
age
group
experienced an approximately similar amount at 43.1 and 45.1, respectively.
In Fix the agreement mistake
groups
women
category, the 45 to 54 led in physical Add an article
the women
activity
shares with about 53.3, followed by 55
to 64 Correct article usage
the 55
age
group
at 53. The 35 to 44 age
group
ranked first. with a physical activity
rate of around 52.5, whereas
the 65 and over age
group
had the lowest proportion. standing at just 47.1.Submitted by shirin_abedi73 on
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