The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates Southlands main exports in 2000, 20... and future projects for 2025 , it is three categories which are international tourism,
Dairy
products
and Meat
products
.
Overall
, the graph shows three different experiences in the same period of time, Dispate these, there is crystal information, Regarding the lowest is Meat
products
also
Dairy
and international products
are almost similar.
By
contrast
International started at 8 in 2000 Add a comma
contrast,
then
gradually in 20… and in 2025 increased until the top 10, on the other hand
, Dairy
products
in 2000 began at 7 and sharply rise
in 20… until 10, after that a slightly decreased by 9.5.
Wrong verb form
rose
However
, the last
one Meat
products
started by 6 in 2000, after a while
gradually downward until 5. In conclusion, all the information is clear, International tourism is gradually upward and in the opposite way meat
products
slightly decreased but dairy
products
are not steady.Submitted by rihas89s on
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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