The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
population
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the population
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aged 65 and over in
England
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, Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland, and the
UK
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in the year 1985, and its predictions for 2035.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
number
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of older people will significantly increase in all given countries in 2035. Wales and Scotland will have the highest
number
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of seniors,
however
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, the
UK
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,
England
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, and Northern Ireland will have approximately the same percentage in 2035.
To begin
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with, the
number
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of seniors was above 15% in 1985, the biggest
number
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in any other country, and
this
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will increase to approximately
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25% in 2035.
Scotlans
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Scotland
started the period with below 15%, and it will rise
substantionally
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substantially
to around 25% in 2035, the second highest country in the
number
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of
elderly
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the elderly
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population.
England
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and the
UK
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began the period with approximately 15%, and they will escalate to over 20% in 2035. Ultimately, Northern Ireland had the lowest
number
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of elderly
individulas
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individuals
, at around
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slightly
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above 10%;
however
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,
this
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will have the wildest fluctuations, with a massive jump to above 20%, meeting with
England
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and the
UK
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at the same percentage.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words england, uk, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ageing population
  • Demographics
  • Percentage
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Predictions
  • Proportion
  • Region/Regional
  • Statistics
  • Gradual change
  • Elderly
  • Life expectancy
  • Healthcare
  • Birth rate
  • Comparative analysis
  • Trend
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