In many countries, formal exams are used to assess students’ abilities and judge the success of their education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using formal exams to assess students’ abilities? Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?
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students
' capability for academic success by
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exams
is the most method
that many countries around the world. I believe that the reliance only on Correct word choice
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exams
does not determine students
' ability to be successful learners. Exams
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teachers
' performance, and judging students
only by exams
is unjustice
.
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Students
' evaluation should based on other factors, such
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also
their commitment. Depending only on exams
to predict students
’ academic success is
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students
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when they do not study well before exams
due to
some circumstances, such
as illness, so they will achieve low marks. For example
, some learners feel anxious during exams
, and this
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while
they are studying. Unfortunately, this
will be reflected on
their results.
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On the other hand
, exams
are considering
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teachers
themselves, besides
students
’ performance and assessing their performance level by responsible authorities. It can give general
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teachers
' capability for explanation is good. Furthermore
, exams
are helping students
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For instance
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teachers
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In conclusion, I believe that exams
are a good way to ensure the assessment of students
’ understanding, but it is not an appropriate manner to evaluate students
. There are many things could
control their educational success, Correct pronoun usage
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like
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, governments can be knowing
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