The charts below give information on the location and the types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below give information on the location and the types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The presented pie chart and line graph present the data on the most popular locations for dance programmes in an Australian town,
as well as
the preferable types of classes among the two groups of teenagers (under 11 and from 11 to 16 years old).
Overall
, it can be noted, that despite the fact, that the children of represented age groups had completely opposite preferences, the most popular locations for classes were private studios and school halls, with almost 48% and 24% of attendance, respectively.
Additionally
, children under 11 preferred ballet the most (with almost 600 students), and modern dancing the least (with approximately 300 people).
Conversely
, the teenagers between 11 and 16 favoured the modern dancing classes the most, with slightly more than 500 attendees, and the ballet the least, with almost 300 students.
Furthermore
, the number of students, who attended tap dancing was practically the same among both age groups, with slightly higher than 400 attendees.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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