The charts below show the total number of students who studied English in Vietnam from 2015 to 2018, and their purposes of learning English.
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students
who study in Vietnam, Use synonyms
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the pie Linking Words
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shows Use synonyms
students
’ reasons for learning English from 2015 to 2018.
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, from the bar Linking Words
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, it is clear to see that Use synonyms
students
aged 17 to 24 had the highest number in 2018, Use synonyms
while
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aged 13 to 16 had the lowest number in 2015. From the pie Use synonyms
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, the Use synonyms
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purpose
oversea
education was ocuupied the biggest portion during the period given.
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, Use synonyms
students
aged 17 to 24 experienced Use synonyms
significant
increase which started at under 10 and peaked at approximately 42 in 2015 and 2018 respectively. Meanwhile, Correct article usage
a significant
students
aged 13 Use synonyms
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experienced a Correct your spelling
to 16
moderately increased
, which Replace the word
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peak
at around 10 in 2017. Wrong verb form
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In contrast
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students
aged 25 to 34 and aged 35+ saw Use synonyms
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increases with Correct your spelling
slight
minnal
fluctuation.
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, the purposes of overseas education took up 58% and 43%, Use synonyms
which
in 2015 and 2018 respectively. The smallest proportion was for school graduation, which accounted for 6%.Correct pronoun usage
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