The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of the city-dwellers in four different

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countries from 1970 to 2020 and

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forecasting

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for 2030 and 2040. The figures are given in percentages.

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, it can be seen that

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population in cities are more likely to increase. Looking first at the year in the part,

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the number of people who live in Malaysia stood at 30 and

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soared to above 70 between 1970 and 2020. At the same time, the figure for

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increased noticeably to under 50 before dipping at approximately between 1990 and 2020.

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, there was a significant rise in Thailand and Indonesia to around 30 and about 50 respectively between 1970 to 2020. Moving on to the year in the future, it is projected that there will be a marked jump in Malaysia to over 80 from 2030 to 2040.

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Philippines's city-dwellers

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forecast to

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growth by 2030.

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the percentage of people who live in Thailand is projected to exponentially leap to just under 50 in 2040. In 2040, it is predicted that there will be a

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rise in Indonesia to about 60.