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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how
was
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the
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house
prices
 changed in five different cities
in
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at
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 two different
time
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times
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 which
was
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were
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 1990-1995 and 1996-2002.
Overall
, 1996-2002, were
most
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 increasing amount of price.
Whereas
, 1990-1995 were significantly lower
prices
 in that
time
.
However
, in 1990-1995, a central
city
 called London was offered the most affordable option for rental houses which was approximately -7% which was as same as Tokyo. In New York
city
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price
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the price
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was
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decreased
exacty
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exactly
 -5% which was stable in the year
of
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1989.
Moreover
, Madrid
city
 increased their rental
prices
just
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 about +2% and at the same
time
 Frankfurt
city
 where
prices
was
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were
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 3%.
On the other hand
, in 1996-2002, there was an increase in
houses price
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house prices
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 where
the
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London
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mostly gained more than +12%.
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New York
city
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City
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also
 started to up their
prices
 which is +5%, Madrid rose a little bit which was just under +5%, Tokyo was able to lift a little but
still
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 in -5% position and
lastly
,
the
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Frankfurt
city
 which was the only
city
 who decreased in that
time
 which was lower than +2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, time, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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