The graphs below show three exports from South East Asia and the four sources of revenue for 1970 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the
exports
of three categories from Southeast Asia between 1970 and 1995, Use synonyms
as well as
the sources of Linking Words
revenue
for the region in 1970 and 1995. Manufactured products became the dominant export over the period, Use synonyms
while
timber experienced a significant decline.
In the first graph, the export of manufactured products Linking Words
increase
dramatically from approximately 10% in 1970 to over 40% in 1995, showing consistent growth throughout the period. Wrong verb form
increased
By contrast
, timber Linking Words
exports
declined sharply from around 35% in 1970 to below 5% in 1995. Use synonyms
Exports
of other raw materials fluctuated slightly but remained relatively stable, ending at roughly 20%.
The pie charts highlight changes in the sources of Use synonyms
revenue
. In 1970, domestic Use synonyms
revenue
accounted for the largest share at 33%, followed by Use synonyms
exports
(29%) and tourism (27%). By 1995, tourism had grown significantly to 54% of Use synonyms
revenue
, Use synonyms
while
domestic Linking Words
revenue
dropped to 21%, and Use synonyms
exports
decreased to 12%. Use synonyms
Revenue
from other sources increased marginally, from 11% to 13%.
In summary, Use synonyms
while
manufactured goods emerged as the key export, the region’s economy became increasingly reliant on tourism as a major Linking Words
revenue
source.Use synonyms
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