The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentage variation in house prices in New York, Tokyo,
London
, Madrid, and
Frankfurt
between 1990 and 2002, and compare them with the average home costs in 1989.
Overall
, it is evident that except for
Frankfurt
, the difference in house values in all given cities significantly increased in 2002.
London
had the highest variation over the period;
whereas
, the average price for buying a home in
Frankfurt
decreased in 2002. From 1990 to 1995,
London
and Tokyo had the lowest average accommodation prices at around below -5%.
However
,
London
jumped massively to over 10% between 1996-2002, the highest percentage shift in the average house costs,
while
Tokyo had a slight rise to around -5% in 2002. New York started the period at -5% and rose substantially to approximately 5% in 2002.
Additionally
, Madrid had the second biggest
change
in 1990 at around over a 0%
change
and increased to slightly below 5%.
Frankfurt
began with approximately a 3%
change
in 1990, the biggest number in any other country;
however
,
this
declined to slightly above a 0%
change
.
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