The graphs below the transport modes in European city between 1960 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the different modes of transport ,used to travel to and one European city in 1960 ,1980 and 2000.
Let me begin by describing the bus transport mode,we will see there are fluctuations in travellers percentage in 1960 more than 15 %.
Also
,there was an increase in 1980 by around 25 %,Meanwhile Linking Words
the
bus Correct article usage
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use
decreased in 2000. In my opinion, the bus Use synonyms
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decreased because the travellers prefer to Use synonyms
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the car. Use synonyms
Additionally
, we can see a huge increasing around 40 %. Another trend can be observed in the Linking Words
use
of the bike and feet in 1960 more than cars and buses. I think Use synonyms
this
increase was Linking Words
due to
people's lack of knowledge about buses and cars . Compared to the year 2000 ,their Linking Words
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has decreased because they tend to Use synonyms
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modern vehicles. The main thing that can be noticed here is that car transport Use synonyms
increasing
in 2000.Wrong verb form
increased
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