A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dea
Dear Kavya,
I hope you are doing well! I was excited when I heard that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday
this
summer. I hope you are going to love it! Camping is such
a great experience that everyone enjoys once in their lifetime when they come out of their comfort zone and explore nature and new things.
However
, there are a few things that are worth considering. Campaigns can sometimes be a bit uncomfortable, especially because of the weather conditions. Moreover
, before choosing the place, you must do some basic research about safety and accessibility. This
is because, in many camping areas, the main threat is wild animals you may such
as bears, wolves, and elephants. You must make sure that you take some local guide with you to lead you on the safe path. But honestly, you must experience that fun and adventure travel.
As for me, I'd be happy to join you for this
trip if you and your friends are good to take me. Since I have been to the campaign two times I would be a great guide for you all. Let me know what you think.
looking forward to hearing from you soon.
With love,
NeejaUnauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to use more connectors and linking words for smoother transitions between paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Provide more details or examples to strengthen your task response.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, making it feel personal and friendly.
Task Achievement
The writing tone is suitable and friendly, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph addresses a different part of the task, keeping the ideas organized.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,