J. The table below shows the expenses of a used bookstore in Scotland for the first and last month of the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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in Scotland in the first and the

last

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month of a particular year(2018).

Overall

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it is clear that

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the highest budget was allocated to rent in both months.

However

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, Maintenance

was

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accounted for the lowest budget in

January

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and

December

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. The price of rent ranked the first in both months which was relatively more than in

December

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with 4909$ by 1687$. Utilities stood at second

ranke

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rank

with 455$ in

January

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and

also

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, Other expenses with 599$ in

December

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Noteably

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Notably

, Wedge and Benefit, equipment and Utilities

had shown

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the

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lower expenses in

December

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compared to

January

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. Maintenance

had

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experinced

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experienced

the

lowet

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lowest

lower

cost in

January

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with 10$

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that

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is about four times

low

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than

this

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December

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with 42$. It is noteworthy that

total

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expences

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expenses

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of the storebook

was

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higher in

December

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compared to

January

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stood

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at 6571

due to

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the

incresing

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increasing

costs of rent,

proffessional

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professional

fees, marketing and other

expances

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expenses

expanses

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Vocabulary: Replace the words january, december with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.

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8
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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