The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the allowance of different categories of life (16 to more than 65
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) that used the
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every day between 2003 and 2006 in the UK. The units are measured in interest.
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, the most exercise of the
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was in 2005 and it reached a pick in
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year
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the least handling of the
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was observed in 2005 again. It can be seen the fluctuation in the amount of used the
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from 2003 to 2006. In terms of two columns, The highest percentage in number of using the
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was in 16 to 24 years 100% per
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in 2005
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there was no difference in using the
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in 16 to 24 years between 2003 and 2004
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80% per
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.
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, from ages 25 to 44, there was a significant increase in the number of used the
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from 2003 to 2006 and it reached a peak in 2006 at 80% per
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. Regarding
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remaining column, A substantial increase in the amount of usage of the
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was seen from 2003 to 2006 in ages between 45 to 54
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the lowest rate in
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period given comprised 60% per
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in 2003
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in the next year it is clear the amount of exertion of the
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raised considerably from 60% to approximately 70% in 2003 and 2004 respectively.
Whereas
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the figure allowance of using the
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dotage 55 to 64 was less than about 55% per
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and the most used of the
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in
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given period accounted for around 50% per
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. With regards to the
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youth ( more than 65 age), there was no fee for using the
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in those years in 2003 and the highest interest in
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column belonged to 2006 with 20% per
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of using the
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age group
  • daily internet use
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • upward/downward trend
  • year-wise
  • distribution
  • fluctuation
  • highest/lowest
  • technological advancements
  • social changes
  • targeted marketing
  • internet usage patterns
  • technological familiarity
  • lifestyle
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