You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Invite him to stay and suggest a date. -Describe the new house and garden. -Say why you like your house.

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Dear Tom I hope

this

letter finds you well.I'm just writing both to express about my new

house

and to invite you

for coming

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to come

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and

staying

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stay

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with me. My former dwelling stood on a bustling street where there was always heavy traffic and noise,so I decided to change my

house

stayed

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stay

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away from the crowds.

Last

month,I bought a new residence in the Halifax suburb where there is a calm district away from the downtown. My new

house

has two rooms and I have equipped them with

necessary

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the necessary

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amenities.

Furthermore

,it has

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apply

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parking and a small garden. When you stay inside the

house

,you can see and enjoy the beautiful landscape in front of the

house

through a large window and

this

is why I truly love

this

place. Across the street are some cafes and restaurants and

also

a large park is located a bit far from here. I want to invite you to

coming

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here and

staying

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with me for a week when I

will be

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free. Next month from May 10th,I will be free for a week.

This

would be a better time for you to come here. I would be very happy if you could come here.I'm very eager to see you. Sadra

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paragraph structure

You might want to split some ideas into separate paragraphs to make the letter flow better. For instance, separating the description of the house and the invitation details.

task completion

Try to provide a bit more detail about the house or why you like it to achieve full task completion. For example, describe specific features of the garden or how they add to your enjoyment.

writing tone

You maintained a friendly and inviting tone throughout the letter, which suits the purpose well.

greeting closing

The letter has a good introduction and closing, making it complete and personal.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Invite him to stay and suggest a date. -Describe the new house and garden. -Say why you like your house.

The Closing

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