The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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he
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The
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picture illustrates the method of how
plastic
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bottles are recycled.
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, the whole recycling process consists of nine individual steps, where the recycling starts
from
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the collection of garbage from trash bins and ends with the production of different products from raw materials used
from
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recylcing
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recycling
. To start with, every person starts to gather their
plastic
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wastes
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materials and gathered
in
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them in
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the bin
in
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which is in the second step it is collected by the truck and
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transported
it
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apply
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to the recycling
center
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for sorting out the collected plastics .After sorting, the next process is they compress the plastics into blocks followed by crushing
it
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into pieces for washing for the production of
plastic
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pellets . Meanwhile ,after
plastic
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pellets
was
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produced they
undergone
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underwent
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heating to form a raw material.
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, the production of raw
material
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materials
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has been observed and the raw materials can be created into a wide range of products
such
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as clothes, pencils, water bottles, and lunch boxes.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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