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The table below shows annual incomes (in thousand USD) of different educational levels in the country of Fantasy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.

The table below shows annual incomes (in thousand USD) of different educational levels in the country of Fantasy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.
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The table illustrates the
incomes
 ( in thousand
USD
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) of
difference
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 educational levels ( High School
Diploma
,
Bachlor's
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bachelor's
Degree
, Master's
Degree
 and
Ph.d
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PhD
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), in the
society
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 of Fantasy
in
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apply
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each year. The units are measured in 10000.
Overall
, the most significant
incomes
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income
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 belonged to the
Ph.D
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PhD
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also
 the lowest proportion of
incomes
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income
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 is for High School
Diploma
. It can be seen that a slight
different
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 between Master's
Degree
 and
Ph
.D is observed. With regards to the first and second column, the annual
incomes
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income
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 from
High
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a High
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Schoole
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School
Diploma
 in
country
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the country
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 of Fantasy is 30000 $
also
 there is a downward trend between
High
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a High
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 School
Diploma
 and
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a Bachlor's
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Bachlor's
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bachelor's
Degree
 in fee of the
incomes
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income
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furthermore
 in terms of
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the Bachlor's
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Bachlor's
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bachelor's
Degree
 it can be
comrised
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comprised
composed
 of
appriximately
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approximately
 41000 for each year. Regarding the remaining column,
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the incomes
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incomes
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income
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 of
Master's
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a Master's
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Degree
 is one of the most crucial
sorces
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sources
 in Fantasy with
annual
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an annual
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incomes
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income
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roughly
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of roughly
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 50000 what is more the other sorsec can be effective on annual
incomes
 for
society
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the society
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 of Fantacy is
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a Ph.D
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Ph.D
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Ph.D. In
in addition
Ph
.D
accounted
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account
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 for 50000 for aech year.
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