The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict Fosbury outskirts changes over a 35-year period between 1980 and 2015.
Overall
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, the city was modernized during
this
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time. Amenities and sports facilities were developed significantly.
However
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, green areas were reduced noticeably. In detail, green fields on the right bottom of the map were converted into a warehouse district. Regarding the top right of the map terraced houses, grocery
shop
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and flats were demolished and a brand-new supermarket
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a parking lot were constructed. Another significant change is the transformation of tennis courts into a big sports centre consisting of tennis, football and rugby fields. A
further
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change is the conversion of a park into a villa region and the building of a new park in the centre of the town.
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the road map of the city did not change considerably, a big roundabout appeared in the centre of the picture. Looking at the top part of the image houses and the city hotel remained unchanged during the same period.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Outskirts
  • Urban expansion
  • Infrastructure development
  • Population density
  • Land use transformation
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Green spaces
  • Transportation options
  • Comparison
  • Key development
  • Redevelopment
  • Rural to urban transition
  • Expansion of facilities
  • Infrastructure upgrade
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