Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think is a complete waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this Statement?
In basic education, which usually consists of 12 years
since
elementary to high school, students must study fundamental Change preposition
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concept
in general. Fix the agreement mistake
concepts
Hence
, they have to learn a lot of subjects which actually they do not like all
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at all
of
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apply
them
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
While
sometimes there are some opinions against it, arguing that it is wasting of time, I think that it is important to learn many things
in the early years of our study. I would like to discuss my argument in this
essay.
Firstly
, learning broad subjects will give young-adults
opportunities Correct your spelling
young adults
exploring
many ideas. Do not let ourselves Change the verb form
to explore
being
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comfort
zone Correct pronoun usage
our comfort
to
early Replace the word
too
whithout
knowing the Correct your spelling
without
things
the world could offer. For example
, a mathematician's son think
that he loves algebra because his father always Change the verb form
thinks
talk
about maths and he has not learned art yet. Probably, after he studies art, he will find himself in art and become a better artist than a mathematician.
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talks
Secondly
, general knowledge
is needed whatever your profession is. Even though eventually we must choose to pursue study in a particular field that we like, it is also
important to have general knowledge
of other things
becase
there is no subject Correct your spelling
because
could
stand alone. Correct pronoun usage
that could
For instance
, as an artist maybe you are very prominent at making scuptures
. Yet, how to sell it ? At least you have to understand a little about business and marketing.
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sculptures
To conclude
, for students it is important to have broad
understanding Correct article usage
a broad
about
many Change preposition
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subject
to explore ideas and to get general Change to a plural noun
subjects
knowledge
. I think,
it is important to comprehend many Remove the comma
apply
things
forming our basic knowledge
before we enter university. I suggest for students to bare
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things
they do not like in school. Who knows it will give them benefits in the future.Submitted by edna.c.pattisina on
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task achievement
Your introduction clearly states your position. Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
coherence cohesion
Improve cohesion by using more linking words and phrases throughout the essay to enhance flow.
task achievement
Clarify some examples and ensure each example directly supports the point being made.
task achievement
You present a well-structured argument with a clear position on the topic.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion effectively frame your essay's arguments.
task achievement
You use relevant examples to support your main arguments.