In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving this message. A

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motivated that they can accomplish their goal if they

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may lead to disadvantages

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as overwork and frustration, but

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it can give successful results. In our century it is common to convince youngsters if they

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their efforts will definitely pay off.

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,

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motivation does not apply to all areas of life. There variety of

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who have different abilities and they can face

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challenges despite their

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.

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, if children are convinced that they can achieve their goals with enough effort they might not accept failures and keep pushing forward until they reach their goals. Eventually, they may

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their true potential, become less confident, and lose their motivation.

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, teaching young

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way has its own benefits like successful results as it helps them to advance on their way to success. When young

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are told that hard

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step toward success and they are motivated by their parents, they will pay attention more and focus on their

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, even when they face some hardships.

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, they can spend more time

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studying

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exams, even sacrificing sleep and leisure activities.

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consistent effort not only helps them to get high scores

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builds resilience,which is essential for their future lives. In conclusion,

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encouraging young

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to believe that hard

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leads to success can foster determination and resilience, it

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carries the risk of overwork and frustration if their efforts do not yield the desired results.

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, it is crucial to balance

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mindset by teaching them to accept failures as part of the journey and to recognize their unique abilities.

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way, they can stay motivated and

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toward their goals

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maintaining their well-being.