The two pie charts and the table below inform us on the budget used for police forces in the year 2017 and 2018 in the area of Britain.The table tells us how the money was collected and the charts show what it was spent on.

The two pie charts and the table below inform us on the budget used for police forces in the year 2017 and 2018 in the area of Britain.The table tells us how the money was collected and the charts show what it was spent on.
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The given table indicates where the money came from meanwhile the pie chart illustrates how it was distributed in the police funds during 2027 and 2018.
Overall
, the British Government was the highest income source of the allocation in both years. More than half of the allocation was spent on salaries
while
less than a quarter of it was given to each of technology and building and transport. The National Government being the biggest contributor towards the budget, had contributed 175.5
million
in 2017
whereas
increased it by a huge amount of 2.3
million
in 2018. Compared to 2017, Local taxes had provided 102.3
million
in 2018 which was
11.1million
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11.1 million
higher than the previous year. Meanwhile, other sources
such
as grants had no significant difference between both years as its participation was 38
million
in 2017 and only another 0.5
million
was added to it in the following year. Police had used the given amount of money on building and transport equally in both years which was a limited portion of 17%. A tiny fraction of 8% was given to technology in 2017 and was uplifted by an additional 6% in the following year. It was yet a small portion of 14% of the budget. Even though the largest source of expenditure was salaries, after spending
three-quarter
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of the income in 2017, they had reduced it to 69% in 2018.
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