the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site
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The current maps demonstrate a particular industrial area of Norbiton and how it is planned to be developed in the future. At first glance, it is comprehended that the site will change to a more residential area and significantly equipped with more facilities
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as medical and educational centres.
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, some green farmlands will be replaced by new highway constructions. On the eastern side of the site, the factories among both sides of the east road will be converted into housing areas
along with
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a spacious playground and a school
at the end
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of the road.
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,
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various habitats, several shops and a medical centre will be built around the central main square. On the top of the map, a few farmlands will be demolished to return to residential areas which will be interconnected to the central part of the region through a bridge over the northern river.
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the main roadway of the region will not considerably change, a new street will be constructed at the western side of the central square among the new housing areas
along with
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a new smaller square on the southern part of the map.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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