The diagram shows how rainwater is harvested for consumption of water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows how rainwater is harvested for consumption of water in an Australian town.
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The diagram explains the steps on how rainwater is collected and processed for consumption in an Australian town.
Overall
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, there are five stages in the process, beginning with collecting the rain and
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ending in sinks.
To begin
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, when it is raining outside, the
water
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is collected into drains around different houses. All of them meet underground making one big pipe with all the rain in it.
This
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liquid is
then
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filtered through a
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filter and exits to another small pipe.
Following
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this
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, it reaches the storage tank, where it is held until
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processes.
Next,
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the
water
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reaches another tank and is treated. The treatment contains chemicals being released into the
water
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,
this
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way filtering it. After that, the liquid reaches its final stage of harvest. Going up in a pipe that leads to houses, sinks
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, where the
water
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is drinkable and ready for usage.
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